Re: libpq documentation cleanups (repost 3)

Robert Haas wrote:
> On Wed, Jan 12, 2011 at 11:53 AM, Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> wrote:
> > The attached patch is a collection of libpq documentation cleanups
> > recommended in a list of changes emailed to me by Leslie S Satenstein.
> >
> > Leslie found a number of places our libpq documentation that were unclear
> > or awkward, and this diff generated by me attempts to address them.
> >
> > I have already updated the documentation proofreading wiki:
> >
> > ? ? ? ?http://wiki.postgresql.org/wiki/Documentation_Proofreading
> 
> I don't think changing "see below" to "refer below" or "call" to
> "execute" is an improvement; even if we did that uniformly throughout
> our documentation, surely future editors are going to reuse those
> phrasings.
> 
> A lot of these other changes look pretty dubious too, although some
> seem worthwhile.

OK, that last part seems kind of vague.  ;-)  Can you hack up the diff
to have just the changes you think are worthwhile?  You can just remove
the parts of the diff you don't like.

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