Обсуждение: Proofreading the documentation

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I mentioned on my blog that I am proofreading our documentation:

    http://momjian.us/main/blogs/pgblog.html#April_22_2009

I have gotten through the first two parts (Tutorial, SQL Language), and
have have created the following patch (diff -u, clearer for single-line
changes):

    ftp://momjian.us/pub/postgresql/mypatches/docs

I found our documentation to be very good. I made an average of two
changes per PDF page, and 95% of those were just wording improvements,
not problems in accuracy or even clarity.

I am only 20% through the docs.  I will take a break now and work on
pg_migrator.

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  Bruce Momjian  <bruce@momjian.us>        http://momjian.us
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Bruce Momjian wrote:
> [ resent without large attachment]
>
> I mentioned on my blog that I am proofreading our documentation:
>
>     http://momjian.us/main/blogs/pgblog.html#April_22_2009
>
> I have gotten through the first two parts (Tutorial, SQL Language), and
> have have created the following patch (diff -u, clearer for single-line
> changes):
>
>     ftp://momjian.us/pub/postgresql/mypatches/docs
>
> I found our documentation to be very good. I made an average of two
> changes per PDF page, and 95% of those were just wording improvements,
> not problems in accuracy or even clarity.
>
> I am only 20% through the docs.  I will take a break now and work on
> pg_migrator.
>

Applied.

--
  Bruce Momjian  <bruce@momjian.us>        http://momjian.us
  EnterpriseDB                             http://enterprisedb.com

  + If your life is a hard drive, Christ can be your backup. +