Re: Draft of 9.2 beta announcement, please revise/improve

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> in performance, vertical and horizontal scalability.

Reads awkward.

> Major performance and scalability advances ready to be tested in this version include:

s/ready to be tested//; ## Makes them sound very fragile and untested

> * JSON data support, permitting building hybrid document-relational databases
> * Range types, supporting new types of calendar, time-series and analytic applications
> * Multiple improvments to make database migrations easier

Can we add details to that last bullet? It's pretty vague in contrast
to the previous two.

> For a full listing of the ready-to-test features in version 9.2 beta

s/ready-to-test//;

> We depend on our community test the next verson in order to guarantee that
> it is high-performance and bug-free.

- From a marketing standpoint, that's a scary sentence.

/twocents

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