Re: Typo on doc comment form
| От | David G. Johnston |
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| Тема | Re: Typo on doc comment form |
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| Msg-id | CAKFQuwZTS6NBLn=H7cuJ52i_C6TxRHLVF3b9Z_WvmnM7XHYmhQ@mail.gmail.com обсуждение исходный текст |
| Ответ на | Re: Typo on doc comment form (Stefan Kaltenbrunner <stefan@kaltenbrunner.cc>) |
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Re: Typo on doc comment form
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| Список | pgsql-www |
On 08/01/2016 03:07 PM, David G. Johnston wrote:
> https://www.postgresql.org/account/comments/new/9.6/ textsearch.html/
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> Would suggest:
>
> Filling out out this form will send an email from
> david.g.johnston@gmail.com <mailto:david.g.johnston@gmail.com> to the
> public pgsql-docs mailing list.
>
> The whole second sentence seems unhelpful. The following points should
> be addressed instead.
>
> Is the submitting email address copied and, related, would they have to
> subscribe to pgsql-docs to track the discussion (assuming that people
> leave the CC: list intact, which not everyone does...)?
I'm a bit confused about what you are suggesting here - the above seems
to be a mix of a rewording of some of the text on the page and some
actual questions on behaviour?
The re-wording I suggested left me asking the subsequent couple of questions. Depending on the answers to them additional text may be desirable. In any case removing "
Expect further discussions to happen on this list after the submission is done." seems worth considering. It does make the text a bit short - but if the two questions raised are addressed we'd actually come out a bit longer and considerably ahead in specifics.
David J.
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