Re: 2023-08-10 release announcement draft

On Mon, Aug 7, 2023 at 9:15 PM Jonathan S. Katz <jkatz@postgresql.org> wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> Attached is the release announcement draft for the 2023-08-10 update
> release, which also includes the release of PostgreSQL 16 Beta 3.
>
> Please provide your feedback no later than August 10, 2023 0:00 AoE[1].
>
> Thanks,
>
> Jonathan
>
> [1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anywhere_on_Earth

"Users who have skipped one or more update releases may need to run
additional, post-update steps; "

The comma should be removed.

"please see the release notes for earlier versions for details."

Use of 'for' twice is grammatically incorrect; I am partial to "please
see the release notes from earlier versions for details." but could
also see "please see the release notes for earlier versions to get
details."


Robert Treat
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