Re: volunteer to draft next update release

On Mon, Oct 24, 2016 at 12:39 PM, Justin Clift <justin@postgresql.org> wrote:
> On 24 Oct 2016, at 03:32, Jonathan S. Katz <jkatz@postgresql.org> wrote:
> <snip>
>> I reviewed Tom’s release notes and changed the major issues per how he prioritized them (Umair: I removed your
descriptionfor the crash issue as that was not prioritized in the release notes).  I also filled out other fixes
includedin the release as well as the post-release instructions.  I also incorporated Justin’s feedback and removed
run-ons.
>>
>>
https://git.postgresql.org/gitweb/?p=press.git;a=blob;f=update_releases/current/update_201610.md;h=f76a5eaaef2a030a8e1c472618a00ff66571f1f3;hb=7cd3c633b13f241db0a258dd9cd6f0aaa436531f
>
> No worries. :)
>
> Small typo here:
>
>    This is also the last release for the PostgreSQL 9.1 as it is now
>    end-of-life.
>
> It either needs "series" after the 9.1, or nuke the "the" just before
> PostgreSQL.

s/pg_upgrad/pg_upgrade.
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Michael