Re: Grammar/punctuation fixes

You're welcome. If you like that general approach -- minimal edits focused on readability/brevity -- I'd be glad to look for other places on the site for edits.

On Mon, Aug 12, 2024 at 9:40 AM Dave Page <dpage@pgadmin.org> wrote:

Hi

On Sat, 10 Aug 2024 at 18:52, Anthony DeBarros <anthonymdebarros@gmail.com> wrote:

Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS and Windows more readable via some minor edits.

On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:

• Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability.
• Split a long sentence in two.
• Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
• Remove italics around “Advanced users”.

[1] https://www.postgresql.org/download/windows/

[2] https://www.postgresql.org/download/macosx/

Thanks - patch committed!

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