Re: 7.4 Press Release -- Draft #3

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> over 100 developers and

Should be "hundreds of "


> Significant advances in the new version include:

Since we last mentioned 7.3 at the end of the last paragraph,
a reminder of which version might sound better:

"Significant advances in PostgreSQL version 7.4 include:"


> Read only transactions, which bring a

Should be "bringing a" to sync with the previous paragraphs.


> while at the same time providing users real time suggestions

Reads better as "providing users with real time..."


> The implementation of SQL99 compliant Information Schema,

Should be "implementation of a SQL99..."


> Statement level triggers, enabling developers and users to define
> and customized behavior of the database when data is stored and
> manipulated.

Could have sworn I reported this one last time. Should be
"define and customize". The whole paragraph is also a little
awkward, IMO.


> A complete list of changes in PostgreSQL version 7.3

Should be 7.4.


> rock solid performance record

Perhaps just "solid"?


> PostgreSQL is available under a BSD License for both commercial
> and non-commercial use.

Expand on this license or link to an explanatory page for people
who may not know the advantages of this.



> How "overhauled" is the documentation?

I believe that this is mostly the layout, not the content.


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Greg Sabino Mullane greg@turnstep.com
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