On 8/21/19 5:02 PM, Erik Rijkers wrote:
> On 2019-08-21 22:43, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> Attached is a first draft of the press release for PostgreSQL 12.
>
> A few typos:
>
> 'PostgreSQL 12 also improvements the performance of' should be
> 'PostgreSQL 12 also improves the performance when'
>
> 'with blocking any queries' should be (I think)
> 'without blocking any queries'
>
> 'write-head-log' should be
> 'write-ahead-log'
>
> 'that can be computed its value from other columns'
> 'that can compute its value from other columns'
>
> and something is not quite right about the sentence containing:
> 'LDAP servers using if it'
> but I can't figure out what it should be.
Thanks! I incorporated most of your suggestions in the updated copy.
Jonathan