Re: First draft of 9.5 release announcement, please comment/edit/suggest

On 01/01/2016 05:24 AM, Stefan Kaltenbrunner wrote:

On 01/01/2016 12:42 AM, Josh Berkus wrote:

On 12/31/2015 12:16 PM, Josh Berkus wrote:

It's here:

http://git.postgresql.org/gitweb/?p=press.git;a=blob_plain;f=releases/9.5/translate/release.translate.txt;h=2f24f8fce19151e1e120ea5b9f2da007638400b1;hb=HEAD

Please give me your corrections, comments, and suggestions for
improvement.  Thanks!

And now the text of the presskit, here:

http://git.postgresql.org/gitweb/?p=press.git;a=blob;f=releases/9.5/translate/presskit95.html;h=459e4099787aa6ff24c0c5440a98637b63d2c3ec;hb=HEAD

on a quick look this seems to be based on an older version of the
presskit release template not the one that was fixed for the 9.4
release. Couple problems I did notice on a quick check:

* images reference http://media.postgresql.org - those should point to
the correct location on www.postgresql.org

Fixing ...

* the wiki URLs are http but should be https

Even for people without wiki accounts?

Anything else?

In the "Quoted Company Information" and the French CNAF quote there's two issues:


    * des systèmes ,ce logiciel open source => need extra space character after the comma : des systèmes , ce logiciel open source
    * fiabilité et est phase de déploiement => fiabilité et est en phase de déploiement

Best regards,

-- 
Gilles Darold
Consultant PostgreSQL
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