> "The PostgreSQL Global Development Team is proud to announce the release
> of version 9.0. "
>
> Maybe "PostgreSQL 9.0" instead of "version 9.0"?
Yeah, tried that too, it seemed repetitive. You don't think so?
> Anonymous functions instead of anonymous blocks? Else put the word
> "code" before blocks.
Oh, right.
> Instead of "driving PostgreSQL's competition" use a synonym for
> "driving" as it sounds weird after just mentioning "drive" in the
> previous sentence.... or change the one in the previous sentence... I dunno.
Yeah, I didn't like the wording on that either. I just didn't have
better ideas.
Thanks for edits.
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