On 2/17/2009 6:52 AM Rob Napier wrote:
> 4. The expression '-- not some company' didn't do it for me. I'd drop that.
> A lot of the people you are targeting work for some company.
Agree with Rob that this wording jumps out. Maybe:
Our worldwide community of hundreds of contributors in dozens of countries develops, runs, promotes, and controls
PostgreSQL-- no one company controls the project.
Otherwise, I think it looks great! One minor style suggestion, since we're all designer wannabes: maybe turn off full
justificationin the grey boxes, leave it left-justified like the others.
Cheers,
Ned
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