Re: Please review tags, links in presskit ASAP

Josh,

Josh Berkus a écrit :
> Ping!  It's been 24 hours ... will anyone have time to do this this 
> weekend?

Here is a first review of features83.html (I start reviewing the other
one, right now):

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line 50: Alows "piggybacking" of large table scans by multiple users
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Allows
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line 74: SSPI on WIndows and GSSAPI on Unix and Linux
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Windows
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line 79: pgStandby
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AFAIK, the real name is pg_standby.
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line 91: <dt>Full Text Search;</dt>
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no need for ;
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line 92: This will both make TSearch easier
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s/TSearch/TSearch2/?
You should perhaps add more details about what is TSearch2 (4-5 words
should be enough). I'm pretty sure a lot of people don't even know what
it is.
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line 124: Many important features do not distribute with the PostgreSQL
core code
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I find this sentence weird (I would have expected "are not distributed")
but perhaps it's just my english skills which are not at their best :)
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line 126: <a href=https://developer.skype.com/
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missing " after href=
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line 132
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missing " after the link in the a tag
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line 136: pgPool
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You're talking about pgPool-II, aren't you?
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Guillaume