Re: typos in 'website 'About'-page
От | Daniel Gustafsson |
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Тема | Re: typos in 'website 'About'-page |
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Msg-id | 35E6236E-79BB-4F4F-8214-99424FF7D4C3@yesql.se обсуждение исходный текст |
Ответ на | typos in 'website 'About'-page (Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>) |
Список | pgsql-www |
> On 23 May 2019, at 15:18, Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl> wrote: > > In > https://www.postgresql.org/about/ > > 'Below is an inexhaustive of various features' should be > 'Below is an inexhaustive list of various features’ > > > And the following sentence seems altogether incorrect: > > 'As of the version 11 release in October 2018, PostgreSQL conforms to at least 160 of the 179 mandatory features for SQL:2011Core conformance, where as of this writing, no relational database meets full conformance with this standard.' > > I think the problem-phrase is 'where as of this writing' (fixing the spelling to 'whereas' doesn't really help) so I suggestto break the above into two sentences: > > 'As of the version 11 release in October 2018, PostgreSQL conforms to at least 160 of the 179 mandatory features for SQL:2011Core conformance. As of this writing, no relational database meets full conformance with this standard.' > > I hope native speakers will correct me if I'm wrong. While not a native speaker, I do agree that your proposed wording is easier to read so I went ahead and applied that together with the other fix. Thanks for reporting! cheers ./daniel
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