7.4 release news item on postgresql.org
От | Merlin Moncure |
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Тема | 7.4 release news item on postgresql.org |
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Msg-id | 303E00EBDD07B943924382E153890E5434AA1D@cuthbert.rcsinc.local обсуждение исходный текст |
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Re: 7.4 release news item on postgresql.org
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Список | pgsql-advocacy |
I just read the short blurb to the 7.4 release. I think it deserves a minor rewrite. Here is the current text: Version 7.4 has been released after a long testing period, due to the rather large number of new "enterprise" features we have. Click download links above to download it, or read more to find out about our new features. Here are my suggestions: The first sentence is a non sequitur. It states postgres was released due to having a large number of enterprise features, while the intended meaning is to imply a long testing period. The word 'enterprise' should not be in quotes because it does not normally appear in quotes. Quotation marks imply a user inferred meaning that differs from the normal one. In this case it implies triteness (at least to me). The personal pronoun 'our' does not belong here. 'Click download links above to download it' is better stated as 'The new version is available in the download section' (perhaps with a 'located above' tacked on to the end). Regards, Merlin
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