Re: typo in sentence

On Tue, Aug  4, 2020 at 06:03:26PM -0700, David G. Johnston wrote:
> On Tuesday, August 4, 2020, Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote:
> 
>     Ganesh A Hegde <sgurukrupa@gmail.com> writes:
>     > There is only a single sentence starting with 'if' and not two. The
>     phrase
>     > 'it is therefore ..' is preceded by a comma and not a period. Hence,
>     > there's a single sentence and not two as you are referring to.
> 
>     I concur with Magnus that the "therefore" refers to the sentences
>     preceding this one.  While we could just drop it as you suggest,
>     maybe better is to rearrange:
> 
>         Therefore, if one PostgreSQL server instance is to house projects or
>         users that should be separate and for the most part unaware of each
>         other, it is recommended to put them into separate databases.
> 
> 
>  
> I put forth a minor reworking of this page a little while back.
> 
> https://commitfest.postgresql.org/29/2647/
> 
> https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/
> CAKFQuwacZW-gNLyScFKFxCg_g7QtT7_HQMOyexuV2zUj=eQFAw@mail.gmail.com

Great.  I made a few slight adjustments and applied it back through 9.5.

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