Re: 9.4 release notes

On Sun, May  4, 2014 at 10:24:54AM -0400, Andrew Dunstan wrote:
> 
> On 05/04/2014 10:12 AM, Petr Jelinek wrote:
> >On 04/05/14 14:46, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> >>I have completed the initial version of the 9.4 release notes.  You can
> >>view them here:
> >>
> >>    http://www.postgresql.org/docs/devel/static/release-9-4.html
> >>
> >>I will be adding additional markup in the next few days.
> >>
> >>Feedback expected and welcomed.  I expect to be modifying this until we
> >>release 9.4 final.  I have marked items where I need help with question
> >>marks.
> >>
> >
> >Nice work,
> >
> >one comment from me would be about jsonb:
> >
> >+       <listitem>
> >+        <para>
> >+         Add structured (non-text) data type (jsonb) for storing
> >JSON data (Oleg Bartunov,  Teodor Sigaev, Peter Geoghegan and
> >Andrew Dunstan)
> >+        </para>
> >+
> >+        <para>
> >+         This data type allows faster indexing and access to json
> >keys/value pairs.
> >+        </para>
> >+       </listitem>
> >
> >I think the explanation should be expanded to say that this data
> >type also has generic indexing not just faster indexing.
> >
> 
> 
> It's also slightly ambiguous - it's not immediately clear that the
> "faster" also applies to the "access".

OK, how is this:
        This data type allows for faster indexing and access to json        key/value pairs, as well as efficient
indexingof all key/value        pairs in a JSON document.
 

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