Re: Release, 3rd draft

On Mon, Oct 03, 2005 at 12:01:40PM -0700, Josh Berkus wrote:
> Folks,
>
> Please take a look at the current draft, (both in docs and in CVS).  I've
> made a few changes:
>
> 1) Added a summary paragraph per Lance's suggestion.  I merged it with the
> 1st paragraph and re-wrote the 2nd so that it flows.
>
> 2) Lance, I still need a title for you.  What are you, R&D director?  What?

His title is Director of Products.

> 3) I replaced the "these are the features" sentences with sub-headers.
> Those sentences seemed redundant with the summary para.
>
> 4) After some reflection, I cut the stuff with OSDL.  It's too much.   We
> mention 8-way and 16-way machines up above.  If we really want the OSDL
> stuff, then I'd say cut Merlin's quote and get one from Mark Wong.
>
> Comments?
>
> --
> --Josh
>
> Josh Berkus
> Aglio Database Solutions
> San Francisco
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