Re: Add A Glossary

On 31.03.20 19:58, Justin Pryzby wrote:
> On Tue, Mar 31, 2020 at 04:13:00PM +0200, Jürgen Purtz wrote:
>> Please find some minor suggestions in the attachment. They are based on
>> Corey's last patch 0001-glossary-v4.patch.
>> @@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
>>         Record</glossterm>s to the file system and creates a special
>>         checkpoint record. This process is initiated when predefined
>>         conditions are met, such as a specified amount of time has passed, or
>> -      a certain volume of records have been collected.
>> +      a certain volume of records has been collected.
> I think you're correct in that "volume" is singular.  But I think "collected"
> is the wrong world.  I suggested "written".
>
"collected" is not optimal. I suggest "created". Please avoid "written", 
the WAL records will be written when the Checkpointer is running, not 
before. So:

  "a certain volume of <glossterm>WAL records<glossterm> has been 
collected."


Every thing else is ok for me.

Kind regards, Jürgen