Re: Small documentation improvement for ALTER SUBSCRIPTION

On 12.08.21 04:52, Masahiko Sawada wrote:
> On Wed, Aug 11, 2021 at 5:42 PM Daniel Gustafsson <daniel@yesql.se> wrote:
>>
>>> On 11 Aug 2021, at 09:57, Masahiko Sawada <sawada.mshk@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Additionally, refresh options as described in
>>> <replaceable>refresh_option</replaceable> of
>>> <literal>REFRESH PUBLICATION</literal> may be specified,
>>> except in the case of <literal>DROP PUBLICATION</literal>.
>>
>> Since this paragraph is under the literal option “refresh”, which takes a
>> value, I still find your original patch to be the clearest.
> 
> Yeah, I prefer my original patch over this idea. On the other hand, I
> can see the point of review comment on it that Amit pointed out[1].

How about this:

-      Additionally, refresh options as described
-      under <literal>REFRESH PUBLICATION</literal> may be specified.
+      Additionally, the options described under <literal>REFRESH
+      PUBLICATION</literal> may be specified, to control the implicit 
refresh
+      operation.