"Joshua D. Drake" <jd@commandprompt.com> writes:
> How about we meet in the middle:
> A safe, respectful, productive and collaborative environment is free
> of non-technical or personal comments related to gender, sexual
> orientation, disability, physical appearance, body size, race or
> personal attacks.
That's not really meeting in the middle: it still specifies exactly
one set of disapproved topics. Might be OK if it read like
"... personal comments, for example ones related to gender, ..."
regards, tom lane